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Bitten (Once Bitten, Twice Shy, #1) Just wowThe only thing that bothered me from this book was while I was reading I caught some errors A he where there should of been a she A word whose spelling is close to what the author actually intended to use Other than all of that, I don t think I have laughe This review has been hidden because it contains spoilers To view it, click here This book was a mess, the writing, the story, the characters,you name it, it was a mess I have never being so aware and annoyed of the mundane actions of a character or the descriptions used for them This book refers to the main a character as a brunette or a small brunette no less than 19 times We get walk through how she washes her hair 3 times and there is another 141 references to hair one way or another.I just couldn t get into the story enough to ignore the obvious hair obsession the au This book was a mess, the writing, the story, the characters,you name it, it was a mess I have never being so aware and annoyed of the mundane actions of a character or the descriptions used for them This book refers to the main a character as a brunette or a small brunette no less than 19 times We get walk through how she washes her hair 3 times and there is another 141 references to hair one way or another.I just couldn t get into Bastian Had To Have Been The Most Handsome Man That Katherine Had Ever Met It Really Was Unfortunate That He Was Also The Most Stubborn, Controlling, Downright Infuriating Jackass She D Ever Known As Well Oh, And There Was The Fact That He Was A Werewolf A Werewolf Who Has Bitten Her Sixteen Year Old Katherine Mayes Had Never Believed In Mythological Creatures Like Werewolves Or Mermaids Certainly Not Those Sparkly Vampires That Her Friend Abby Was Obsessed With Even When She S Bitten By A Massive Animal After A Reckless Night Of Teenage Adventure And Her Body Begins To Change In Mystifying Ways, She Can T Force Herself To Believe In What She S Convinced Is Impossible Little Does She Realize She S Been Infected With A Disease A Little Permanent Than The Rabies She Feels Fortunate To Have Not Contracted.Lycanthropy.Her Fierce Denial Is Soundly Shattered, However, When She Is Simultaneously Saved And Kidnapped By Bastian And His Pack Forced To Leave Small Town Iowa Behind And Adjust To Their Way Of Life In A Hidden Society, Katherine Must Also Deal With Fighting The Pull She Feels Towards The Man Or Wolf, Rather Who Has Bitten Her And Disrupted Her Life So Completely. DNFd when the sixteen year old heroine, a brunette as we are reminded on every page, drives two hours into the wilderness in a car to escape someone chasing her from the ruins of her home where her father is bleedi BittenShe a human who is bitten and her whole life changed as she is introduced to pack and a new way of life in book 1 This review has been hidden because it contains spoilers To view it, click here Rant starting in 321 52% in and done What The F % This was terrible Absolutely freaking terrible The hero bites the girl as the title gives away I suppose Kidnaps her while allowing her to believe that her parents are dead Allows others to bully her in front of him Actually picks her up and throws her on a bed to keep her from leaving Is condescending and ridiculously rude Punishes her for trying to return to her family And finally HE PEES ON HER TO MARK HIS TERRITORY Rant starting in 321 52% in and done I have no idea how to review this book so let s jump right in with the negatives The edition that went to my kindle had editor footnotes So while reading a footnote would pop up and recommend a different verb or point out redundant word uses There were a lot of grammatical errors Maybe it was updated in a later edition but they were especially noticeable with editorial footnotes pointing them out This is a ya book with a 16 year old character And while it nailed down the angst, stupi I have no idea how to review this book so let s jump right in with the negatives The edition that went to my kindle had editor footnotes So while reading a footnote would pop up and recommend a different verb or point out redundant word uses There were a lot of grammatical errors Maybe it was updated in a later edition but they were especially noticeable with editorial footnotes pointing them out This is a ya book with a 16 year old character And while it nailed down the angst, stupidity, and indecisiveness of teens, there were very out of character moments that belonged in an older book When someone is not being referred to by their name, they are referred to by their hair color For example Sophie struggled to reach the top shelf The blonde turned and asked Zane to help The brunette reached the cookies for Sophie Not a direct quote, but you get the idea And now it s time to point out some cliches The RabidReads.com What if you are a teenage girl who on a sort of dare visits the local haunted house and gets bit by a werewolf One that tries but fails to carry you off That s the premise of this young adult read It s also one that I read almost non stop.Katherine is sixteen and lives in a really small town in Iowa The only thing to do for fun for teens is to walk by the old supposedly haunted house and try to scare each other Not a good idea during a full moon Of course she doesn t know t RabidReads.com What if you are a teenage girl w 3.5 Stars I felt hooked to this story It had a good pace to it, and something was always going on I was never bored however, I was a bit put off with the errors that were missed after editing You could see the red words from the editor in a few places, and there were KD remarks Those remarks could be found at the end of the book and were notes from the editor to the author to fix I m not sure how these were not spotted by the author during her last proof reading before submitting it.Otherwi 3.5 Stars I felt hooked to this story It had a good pace to it, and something was always going on I was never bored however, I was a bit put off with the errors that were missed after editing You could see the re Bastian had to have been the most handsome man that Katherine had ever met It really was unfortunate that he was also the most stubborn, controlling, downright infuriating jackass she d ever known as well Lycanthropy.Her fierce denial is soundly shattered, however, when she is simultaneously saved and kidnapped by Bastian and his pack Forced to leave small town Iowa behind and adjust to their way of life in a hidden society, Katherine must also deal with fighting the pull she feels towards th Bastian had to have been the most handsome man that Katherine had ever met It really was unfortunate that he was also the most stubborn, controlling, downright infuriating jackass she d ever known as well Lycanthropy.Her fierce denial is soundly shattered, however, when she is simultaneously saved and kidnapped by Bast


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