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Moving On I read my version online at Literotica.com where Rob writes under robcub32 There s something about the way Rob writes that just does it for me and he s fast becoming a favourite because he has a sweet, simple, laid back style of writing which I just find so easy to read The love stories are warm fuzzy romantic but when he hits you with the sex or a love scene its sort of a Hot erotic surprise in the way it contrasts with the sweetness of the romance The cheating aspect to the story did have I read my version online at Literotica.com where Rob writes under robcub32 There s something about the way Rob writes that just does it for me and he s fast becoming a favourite because he has a sweet, simple, laid back style of writing which I just find so easy to read The love stories are warm fuzzy romantic but when he hits you with the sex or a love scene its sort of a Hot erotic surprise in the way it contrasts with the sweetness of the romance The cheating aspect to the story did have me wishing that the perpetrators got a bitretribution and I suppose in real life there would have beenarguments and thrashing it out between cheaters and cheatee but then again this is really quite short so I suppose it got pared back a tad because of lengh Aiden the little boy is adorable but thankfully not precocious and Alex and Mase scourtship is really lovely Mase s mum is a lovely supporting character too All in all I thought this was a really endearing little love story that probably did lack a little bite but I still really enjoyed it Left me smiling so that s a good thing This was a littleobviously porn, maybe I dunno It was a nice enough story but I didn t really connect I just did not see any of the emotional attachments form or really feel them in action And I would have wanted the cheaters to receive some sort of punishment other than losing Mason as best friend or husband, I mean The way it is, they get away with blaming Mason for their own fuck ups, just because he moved on afterwards.Again condoms were apparently a non issue, except during the This was a littleobviously porn, maybe I dunno It was a nice enough story but I didn t really connect I just did not see any of the emotional attachments form or really feel them in action And I would have wanted the cheaters to receive some sort of punishment other than losing Mason as best friend or husband, I mean The way it is, they get away with blaming Mason for their own fuck ups, just because he moved on afterwards.Again condoms were apparently a non issue, except during the cheating Which is a bit odd And I don t think Alex offering to pull out before he comes really works that well for STD protection during anal sex This isn t about avoiding pregnancy, for god s sake Not that it would be all that reliable for that either, but I digress Still, I need to remind myself that apparently porn plays fast and loose with such things Eh.So yeah It was okay but nothingthan that This is a free short It deals with some interesting topics, but keeps them pretty light.Mason has been in a committed relationship for 6 years, he even married his husband.Imagine his surprise when he comes home to find his best friend and his husband having sex I had a few WTH moments that I just can t quite overlook completely, so I ll spoiler them view spoiler Yeah, well, that was the end of the marriage and the friendship And seriously I had a lot of trouble with that part, we are led This is a free short It deals with some interesting topics, but keeps them pretty light.Mason has been in a committed relationship for 6 years, he even married his husband.Imagine his surprise when he comes home to find his best friend and his husband having sex I had a few WTH moments that I just can t quite overlook completely, so I ll spoiler them view spoiler Yeah, well, that was the end of the marriage and the friendship And seriously I had a lot of trouble with that part, we are led to believe Dale hated Damian, why is he cheating on mason with him, regularly is seems Anyway, Alex a friend of Dale s, helps Mason pick up the pieces and they get involved and fall in love.I think I would have enjoyed it a lotof not for a few things Mason talks to a lawyer, but finds out filing for divorce is a bitcomplicated, so he doesn t do anythingabout it Really He moves in with Alex but it reads like Dale was the one that filed and got the divorce moving I don t know, i don t like that it sounds like mason just dropped it If Dale hadn t done it, what then Then, remember Mason s ex is a cheater, yet a month after leaving him mason is sleeping with Alex WITHOUT condoms Really That bugged me.Then, I think Ami is a bad influence on me, but seriously Mason calls Alex, well Alex But all Alex seems to be able to call Mason after they start kissing is baby Every single sentence is baby this and baby that.And although Aiden is cute and a nice part of the story, I really did agree with Mason, Alex uses Aiden to get Mason to agree with things and to let him in I m not sure I liked that hide spoiler Ok, I m nitpicking, it was cute and free and ignore my issues But onething, this is the first time I have ever had a book end with this kind of last sentence My ass contracted with every spurt of come With a little work this could have been a great angsty read, as it stands its a simple, sweet, story with a tiny hint of angst and an adorable kid thrown in I enjoyed watching Alex and Mason grow closer, but I d of loved a biton Mason and Dale Without a bitdetail on their relationship the whole cheating story is a bit out of the blue.Sadly there is no pay back in this one either and I always like a little revenge served up with my cheating lol.Overall an easy fast read if you need With a little work this could have been a great angsty read, as it stands its a simple, sweet, story with a tiny hint of angst and an adorable kid thrown in I enjoyed watching Alex and Mason grow closer, but I d of loved a biton Mason and Dale Without a bitdetail on their relationship the whole cheating story is a bit out of the blue.Sadly there is no pay back in this one either and I always like a little revenge served up with my cheating lol.Overall an easy fast read if you need a quick romance fix 3,5 upgrade because it s free Another great free story. Betrayed By His Husband And His Best Friend, Mason Finds Himself Alone, Living Back At Home With His Mom When His Husband S Friend Alex Stops By To Take Him To Lunch To Talk, Mason Finds He Can T Resist Getting To Know The Other Man, Words He threw away something precious I m not giving it back When Mason walks in on Dale, his cheating asshole husband, and Damien, his narcissistic, selfish best friend having sex, seemingly not for the first time, he ends the marriage and moves back with his mother Hurt and depressed Mason just goes to work and locks himself in his bedroom until Alex, one of Dale s best friends, comes to look how he is doing Alex Mason, with the approval of Mason s mother, start spending time together and fHe threw away something precious I m not giving it back When Mason walks in on Dale, his cheating asshole husband, and Damien, his narcissistic, selfish best friend having sex, seemingly not for the first time, he ends the marriage and moves back with his mother Hurt and depressed Mason just goes to work and locks himself in his bedroom until Alex, one of Dale s best friends, comes to look how he is doing Alex Mason, with the approval of Mason s mother, start spending time together and falling for each other This is a really short story with sweet bear, Alex, and his adorable son, Aiden I was really looking forpayback towards Dale and Damien and would have like to know if Dale had cheated with other men as well But overall a quick fun read Most of Rob Colton s shorts are a solid 3 star for me I like them a lot, and I do get emotionally connected to the characters which is huge for me , but the overuse of people s names, the simplistic dialogue, and at times cheesy writing usually keep the rating form going any higher.Those same things apply here But as I said, I liked it Mason was a good character, the lack of a blurb left things up in the air I had no idea what this was going to be about or where it was going Not gonna say Most of Rob Colton s shorts are a solid 3 star for me I like them a lot, and I do get emotionally connected to the characters which is huge for me , but the overuse of people s names, the simplistic dialogue, and at times cheesy writing usually keep the rating form going any higher.Those same things apply here But as I said, I liked it Mason was a good character, the lack of a blurb left things up in the air I had no idea what this was going to be about or where it was going Not gonna say I wasn t surprised by the twist and I definitely was tearing up along with Mason view spoiler he caught his husband fucking his bes friend hide spoiler But the way it worked out was great and I enjoyed the read.A few critiques specific to this story as opposed to the general ones I listed above 1 I guess things worked out the way they would in real life, but I wanted a littlenegative karma pay back for the bad guys in this view spoiler besides the single encounter with each of them, I didn t feel total closure with Damien or Dale I think that s because I at least wanted Mason to tell them off and he really didn t say much But I guess he doesn t need to, anyone with a brain know they were in the wrong hide spoiler 2 The sex scenes can be a little long winded at times and are actually some of the times when I emotionally connect the least with the characters This was also the case in Salvation, sometimes they are just added in where they are not needed or feel forced.3 Random inconsistency view spoiler Mason immediately looked into filing for divorce, but since they got married in MA, they had to be a resident of MA to get divorced I m assuming that s cuz MI doesn t consider them married OK, but then they are still married if he ever went to MA And then at the end, Dale filed for divorce and Alex said about time huh hide spoiler Although I really liked this book I still thought Mason broke up with Dale way too fast and I dunno easy I know Dale cheated on Mason with Damien, Mason s friend and it was a hideous thing to do, no doubt about it All theawful that Mason walked in on them having sex But still they were together with Dale for 6 years, 3 of them being married and Mason didn t even once talked to Dale in person about their break up He just didn it over the phone In no way I m defending Dale, but his la Although I really liked this book I still thought Mason broke up with Dale way too fast and I dunno easy I know Dale cheated on Mason with Damien, Mason s friend and it was a hideous thing to do, no doubt about it All theawful that Mason walked in on them having sex But still they were together with Dale for 6 years, 3 of them being married and Mason didn t even once talked to Dale in person about their break up He just didn it over the phone In no way I m defending Dale, but his later behavior, his frequent calls and how upset he was seing Mason and Alex together looked like he was genuinely sorry and didn t want to lose Mason for good No matter how Damien insinuated later I still think there was a chance to save their marriage, and I kind of felt sorry about what Mason and Dale lost.Still it was a good book and I loved Alex, he was awesome so supportive, patient and loving great guy His lottle son Aiden was adorable too Mason s mom was such a sweet and fun lady, I loved her It s really nice to see supportive parents for a change


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About the Author: Rob Colton

Rob Colton is a software developer by day, and avid reader of romance novels at night A romantic at heart, he loves stories that feature big, burly men who find true love and happy endings.Stories can be found on Literotica, Nifty and Gay Authors under the username robcub32.